My first rewritten rock song--Every Rose has its thorn

[LG]

Hope you like it. Its my very first rock rewritten song

Every Rose Has its Thorn

Although i know where im at
my heart feels miles apart inside
Was it somethin i said or somethin i did
Did the things i do was right
I tried to do the right things
I really tried
but I guess thats why they say

Chorus
Every rose has its thorn
Just like every sunset has its dawn
Just like a soldier pleads for mercy
Every road has its thorn

Verse Two
I hear the raindrops
Hitting on my window
Hear the voices saying life is
Easy come and easy go
But I wander if anyone knows
If anyone feels like this
I would have felt better If You were here right now
But you let me somehow guess that

Chorus
Every rose has its thorn
Just like every sunset has its dawn
Just like a solider pleads for mercy
Every rose has its thorn

Verse Three-Leading into Bridge and Chorus\
Though its been a while now
I feel so much grace
Just like Jesus was at my door
The wound was there, but its...its gone

I wish I could have went back and changed things
I felt so much pain
But I never want to change
what happened to me

He came and gave His life
It meant so much to me
It tears me up when I think
of how much He gave for me

Every rose has its thorn
Just like every sunset has its dawn
Just like a solider pleads for mercy
Every rose has its thorn

[yankeesman77]

cool, are you going to be doing this for Guns N' Roses, Rock Bands in General, God Rock? I don't know but cool with this song.

[LG]

well i was gonna do this for Rock in General...and since Guns n Roses are awesome I decided to do this song. It was a slower song which I wanted to start off with and I think my next rewrite will be one of Ozzys

[Slash]

Poison did that song dude, not Guns 'n' Roses

[LG]

sorry i knew it was poison, just sidetracked b/c ive listened to both bands together for long time

[Jodes]

that was awesome. i think you should do more:)