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legolas4792
08-07-2008, 04:44 AM
Look into my eyes and you’ll see the depths of my soul
I wonder what you’ll see
You may see an Angel, a Human, or maybe a troll
But, the vision that appears is the real me.

You may not like what is set before you
But it will never change
The soul that you chose to view
Is sincere even if it’s strange

But I’ve seen into your soul too
I’ve plunged deep into the complex
I never had a clue
There existed a soul of such perplex

I’ve looked into your soul and you’ve looked into mine
We are both cursed with human flaws I can’t disagree
But we are divinely intertwined
Our souls are linked
We’re meant to be....

Hernandez

The RKO
08-07-2008, 04:46 AM
Keeeeewl.

The Olympic Chick
08-07-2008, 04:47 AM
OOo Very nice Mike! That's really good for only taking 10 minutes. :D

JohnCenaFan28
08-07-2008, 04:59 AM
Wow, very deep. I liked it Mike, I dunno why you don't post more.

legolas4792
08-07-2008, 05:03 AM
i dont know, give me some themes to write about

also fixed the troll line it made no sense lol i dont proofread

The RKO
08-07-2008, 05:07 AM
a theme could be wwe?

JohnCenaFan28
08-07-2008, 05:09 AM
Maybe lies or something? I wanna hear something darkish.

legolas4792
08-07-2008, 05:26 AM
ah im more of a romantic poet but sounds fun eel

Lady DeathStrike
08-07-2008, 06:22 AM
i like it mike xxx