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legolas4792
08-13-2008, 03:18 AM
A Harlot's Last Lie
Disclaimer: This song does not reflect my feelings towards anyone it was just a request by Eel

LIES
You’ve deceived me for the last time
LIES
I’m done playing your stupid game
LIES
You’ll never trick me again
LIES
That’s it BITCH get ready to DIE!


After all I’ve done for you…
After all that we’ve been through…
Look what you turned me too…
And now I’m coming after you…

[Chorus]
All the lies that you have told…
All the deceptions you have sold…
Proved to me your heart is cold…
You always have been such a bitch…
The thought of you just makes me twitch…
Forgetting you is all I wish…



It didn’t have to be this way…
We coulda never seen this day…
But you chose to betray…
And now you are gonna pay…


My body’s burning thinking of you…
But you don’t have a clue
So Now I bid you adieu
Cause soon you’ll be burning too...

[Chorus]

LIES
You never loved me
LIES
You took all my money
LIES
Now it is your time to pay
LIES
A harlot’s all you’ll ever be
LIES
I’ve finally have been set free
LIES
I’ll have my revenge on this day

LIES…

Hernandez

The Olympic Chick
08-13-2008, 03:20 AM
I love it! It reads like something Kurt Angle would resight to Karen on Impact or something. Haha. Nicely written Mike. :D

JohnCenaFan28
08-13-2008, 03:51 AM
The song's really deep, I enjoyed reading it. Glad you took my idea and made something great out of it, the chorus was amazing and I'm happy you got something so good in so little time. In all, impressive song:)

legolas4792
08-13-2008, 04:31 AM
thanks any more requests?